English+editing+exercises

SENTENCE EXERCISE Proofread and edit the following: 1. I don’t have many interests but I love my guinea pig’s and dog, I have two guinea pig’s and one dog, the guinea pig’s eyes are white they have the same colour eyes but they are not blind or deaf at all, and I have a german shepard dog. 2. I have two brothers and one sister George is 34 and living in Alice Springs Jo is 36 and living in Tasmania he is married his wife’s name is Jessica they have a son and a daughter. 3. What is wrong with this sentence? Write it correctly. But most importantly my work with Fred and my relationship to him.